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PostSubject: The Story Of Commander Dan   Tue Mar 02, 2010 5:49 am

AND NOW FOR THE FAN- FIC YOU'VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR

prologue

war. death . hatred. they are the constants of life now every now and then i find someone who asks " was there ever a time where people didn't fight?" and the answer to that is yes, long ago on my planet we had a peaceful coexistance with one another. that all changed one day , that dark day when in the sky it came bring with it a tool of destruction. anger, is the sole base of everything negitive and that is what it carried, a virus that spread all the anger ever in a sole person's body. that started out like any other day being good and such, but when it crashed those who were infected the worst brought our civilisation to it's knees.



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PostSubject: Re: The Story Of Commander Dan   Sat Oct 23, 2010 8:57 pm

Ch 1 Peace and Harmony

Year: 3107

i wake in my room on he 50th floor of the Disenburg tower located in the middle of the Kronos metropolis. I dress and begin to leave, my wife has already gone to work as head of Williams industries, with me being a Hierarch some one has to keep business going. i take an elevater up to the roof ( 600 flight of stairs is a lot for anyone ) when i reach the the concil has a Chevair waiting for me. i enter the chevair and it bolts to the Capital. the capital is a massive building that house most of the multformers, only a few high ranking offficals like myself get live in our own places. Personally i think it's just way to crowded in there, so i bought my wife and i a room in Disenburg tower. when we reach the landing pad i get off and tip the pilot with 100 terlecks he thanks me and goes of to his other clients. i walk through the large banquet hall of the Capitol. i casullay jump 200 feet to the debate hall ( i love using my powers when nowone's looking ). i enter the back room where the other two Hierarchs are waiting, My brother William Detrov Williams and Nic Astain Dietz are my Hierarch attaches we enter the Debate room and all the Senators stand and clap ( there are over 1,000,000 of them so it's loud ). I and the Hierachs sit down and so does everyone else. After everyone is seated i speak " NOW THE FLOOR IS OPEN FOR THE DEBATE!". As sooon as i'm finished a large group of senators from flintask take the floor and call on William for knowlege on a new building site near the Carsbolv Mts. After that is over another Debate requires Nic to speak, this goes on for about 68 hours then a lone Kronos Senator stands up i don't belive i've ever seen him at a Debate. When he stands he calls on me and say we need to prepare for an oncoming storm, i have the cheif Meteoroligist show that the scan across the planet are clean. The senetor lets out a chilling laugh and then yells " YOU WILL ALL FALL AND CRUMBLE TO YOU KNEES WHEN THIS STORM COMES AND THEN SOME OF YOU WILL SLICE YOUR FAMILIES THROATS IN YOUR THIRST FOR BLOOD HA HA HA!". And just like that he disapeared in a black puff of smoke. We decided to call off the Debate early that day. I went home and crawled into bed early shuddering at what happened that day. if only we knew what was coming for us if only we knew.................


TO BE CONTINUED!
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