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PostSubject: LIVING WITH SIN   Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:25 pm

chapter one: the audition



Avarice: umm.... yea.. ok i think thats good. Hello everyone my name is avirice but u can call me avi and i am here to sign up for this beauty contest in Oriton and i am sending this video so u might pick me as a contestant.
i have seen every beauty contest and i think i have a chance. i can juggle, i think im a people person, i can speak two thousand twohunderd and sixtytwo languages, i would totally use the prize money for world peace and things, ppl like giveing me stuff and i can use that to my advantage, i have an army of purses that eat peop....


?????: ey!!! avarice my guitar isnt in my room u wouldnt be useing it as a spare piggy bank again are u
?????: hrnn. what. why is ur camcorder set up? are u makeing a video?


Avarice: well Wrath its actully on right now and....
Wrath: AHAHAHA!! your makeing a movie for youtube arnt u. let me guess a naughty little dance right?!
'ello there boys dont get me wrong but i think shes a couple hunderd year old for ya'll, dont get confused! Put your sockmonkeys back where they belong!(snort)

Envy: urm hi guys whats going on
Wrath: Avarice here was about to put on an unsavory show. being the only responsible sister ive stepped in to show her the errors of her ways. (as she puts her arms and head on Avi's head)
Avarice: but i wasnt.
????: ?
Envy: Oh a video?. i didnt kno.. i dont have any make-up..
Wrath: oh im sure avi has some around here for her preformances. right avi?
Avarice: well,yes.. i mean no! NO!!
????: mrf(toothbrush in mouth). hey guys does anyone kno if we have any mouthwash left?
Wrath: OOOOOH!! i kno a great way to boost your rateings avi! Lust lose the towel!
Lust: hmm? OK *drops the towel*
Avarice: NOOOOOO!!!!!*blocks lust from being recorded*
Wrath: HA! HA! HA!
Gluttony: Everyone! dinners ready!
Avarice: lets just put this back ... and could everybody just....
Envy: *holds onto wrath* Ilike your sweater. i wish i had this
Gluttony: Its going to get cold...!
Wrath: HEY, LUST HAD THE RIGHT IDEA. EVERBODY GET NAKED!!!!
Sloth: (yawn)hmm what?
Gluttony: Well ok but someone has to hold this.
Avarice: !!!!
Envy: alright*as she takes off her shirt*
Wrath: MUWAHAHAHA!*as she takes her sweater off*
Sloth: ok *zip*
Avarice: NO! NO! NO! NO NAKED TIME!! YOU GUYS *as she puts her face up to the camra* ARRRGH!!! HOW DO UYOU TURN THIS STUPID THING O-.. WHY DO YOU HAVE TO MESS EVERYTHING UP, WRATH!? OOOGH!!
Wrath:pfff thank me when you're on the frontpage of youtube
Avarice: I WASNT MAKING...GRRR!!! I WANTED TO GET ON A BEAUTY CONTEST!!! THEY ARE TAKING AUDITIONS AND...big prize after you win.... *voices fade* id thought it be fun



???: PRIDE?
Pride: yes sir, hello sir
Sir:WHAT HAV YOU TO REPORT
Pride: nothing much sir it appears as tho my sisters have unexpectedly auditiond for the tournament we are having in Oriton tho
sir: hmm well we will just have to see what ur sisters can do now wont we
Pride: yes ok sir
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:39 pm

cheers cheers cheers cheers nice rosie xD
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:49 pm

say Sara, mind if i help out by posting pics in your story?
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:56 pm

yes plzzzz
iv tried but all i get is nothing
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 8:39 am

XD good story Sara
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:41 am

ok this is the bio about the sin girls

Firstly! We have Wrath!
Wrath is the largest of the Sins, at a staggering 6'5", and by far the most vocal. She has absolutely no qualms about speaking her mind when the time calls for it, and even more so when the time doesn't. She drinks hard, plays hard, and hits really really REALLY hard. She is the most likely Sin to destroy everything.
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Likes: heavy metal music, breaking glass.
Dislikes: silence, everyone that pisses her off (which is, indeed, everyone.)
Color: Red.
Symbol: The bear.
Punishment in Hell: Dismemberment whilst still alive.
Opposing virtue: Patience.
Personal demon: Satan.





Second in the line of the Sin girls.
Lust-
"The inordinate craving for the pleasures of the body."
Lust is a perplexing vixen. No one is ever entirely sure of her motives. Then again, no one is sure SHE'S aware of her own motives. She's a dreamy sort, often walking throughout the world completly nude.Though she looks innocent, her piercing eyes belie her harmless exterior..
STATS
Likes: soft sheets, satin sheets, silk sheets, etc.
Dislikes: boring people, cigarettes
Color: Blue.
Symbol: The cow.
Punishment in Hell: Smothered in fire and brimstone. (Depending on where you do your research.. heh.)
Virtue: Chastity.
Demon: Asmodai.



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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:51 am

Third in the series, the altogether disturbed
Envy (Invidia)
"The desire for others traits, status, abilities or situation."
Envy is a tad on the spooky side. She generally keeps to herself, but emerges every now and then to peer at people from afar, or on rare occasions, slither over their shoulder and comment on what they're doing. Typically this activity is followed by her griping as to how much she wishes she could do what you're doing as well as you do it, even if it's something as simple as eating a bologna sandwich. Needless to say, she's got a bit of a self-esteem problem. She also keeps a pet python, Leviathan.
STATS
Likes: writing depressing poetry, spying on people
Dislikes: herself
Color: Green. (Duh.)
Symbols: the dog or the serpent
Punishment in Hell: Submerged in freezing waters.
Opposing virtue: Love.
Demon: Leviathan.






And next in line
Sloth (Accidia)
The avoidance of physical or spiritual work.
Not much can be said about Sloth. Namely because she never does very much. When she DOES move, more often than not it's to find a better place to sprawl out. Though she's not ill-tempered, her general indifference can make her seem rather cold, although she's believed to have a rather soft heart behind the silent exterior. Gluttony is nice to her, and as such she often follows her around. Albeit very slowly. Did I mention Sloth weighs about 4,000 pounds? In other words, you have to be more than just determined to try and move her. You have to be insane. And she is usully seen asleep so she has a third eye on her forehead that is always open when shes asleep but closed when shes awake.
STATS
Likes: sleeping, books, kittens, birds
Dislikes: going outside, cars
Color: Gray.
Symbol: The goat.
Punishment in Hell: Thrown into snake pits.
Virtue: Zeal, diligence.
Demon: Belphegor.



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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:06 pm

the fifth sin Gluttony
Gluttony (Gula)
"The inordinate desire to consume more than that which one requires."
Sweet as sugar and twice as addicted to it, Gluttony, for all her politeness and good nature, is well on her way to eating everything possible.Out of all the Sins, she's probably the kindest, the least probable to kill deliberately,so to speak, and enjoys taking care of others. Her appetite gets the better of her when she least suspects it, manifesting in a huge set of jaws on her apron thatr devour everything remotely edible in sight. And I do mean remotely. She had a house cat once.
STATS
Likes: cooking, cleaning, eating
Dislikes: dirty dishes
Color: Orange.
Symbol: The pig.
Punishment in Hell: Force-fed rats, toads and snakes.
Opposing virtue: Faith and temperance.
Demon: Beelzebub




6. heh heh. Here's the cruelest of the Sins, Pride..
Pride (Superbia)
The darkest of the Sin girls. She enjoys methodically and systematically picking people apart from the foundation of their very being, and destroying them facet by facet, all while indulging in her own glory. She has a series of mirrors hooked up to her gown, which fan out like a peacock's tail when she needs an emergency reminder of how gorgeous she really is. The rest of the Sins aren't terribly fond of her, but she could care less, as she knows they're all jealous trollops anyway.
STATS
Likes: Herself.
Dislikes: You.
Color: Violet.
Symbol: The horse.
Punishment in Hell: Broken on the wheel.
Opposing virtue: Humility.
Demon: Lucifer.

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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:15 pm

and last but not least (if i say least she would kill me)
haha.. Greed. Otherwise known as Avarice
Greed (avarita)
"The desire for material wealth or gain, ignoring the realm of the spiritual.."
Greed gets quite peeved if you refer to her as a little kid, but certainly goes out of her way to act like one. She's the demonic equivalent of a spoiled daddy's girl (well, more demonic anyway), and has no shame in acting every bit the part. She loves to go shopping, and to a greater extent, plotting bank heists and get-rich-quick schemes (typically including people in the plot without thier knowledge). She may not be much of a physical threat by herself, but she stands a tremendous danger to anyone's financial well-being.
She travels around with a small flock of nipping purses, which have been known to bite a few ankles in aid of their master while she's running from the authorities (escaping whilst in high heels is no easy task). The purse around her neck opens only when she wishes to put valuables in it. and is never seen taking stuff out of it.
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Likes: shiny things!
Dislikes: poor people (particularly art students)
Color: Gold/yellow.
Symbol: The frog. (yet she's terrified of them)
Punishment in Hell: Boiled in oil.
Opposing virtue: Generosity.
Demon: Mammon





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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 1:57 pm

thx nall for the pics
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 2:00 pm

np. anytime need to post them just call.
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 2:08 pm

wow
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 2:42 pm

the 7 deadly sins, they have come back............., i willl have to stop them again
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 2:43 pm

DIETZ KNOCK IT THE HELL OFF!!!
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 2:46 pm

WELL TO BAD DEITZ UR NOT IN THIS STORY!!!
was going to add u in but then u said that and bai bai alien chr
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 3:39 pm

chapter 2: oritons tournament
(comeing soon to a theater near u)
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:18 pm

oh and i almost forgot SELEN DO NOT DELETE A SINGLE POST ON THIS THREAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! evil: Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:20 pm

i wasnt going to, for about a week-amonth, and i only do it so that way theres no off topic posts taking up the pages, all there is are the chapters
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:21 pm

this is an off-topic type story
it just doesnt belong in off topic
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:23 pm

its still a story, so it stays here, if you posted it in off topic i would have moved it in here XD
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:27 pm

but the next chapter is called oritons tournament
selen vs lust
nall vs greed
sara vs wrath
saliana vs pride
sena vs envy
gluttony vs vuuk
maria vs sloth
lance vs seira



(still thinking who fights who)


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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:30 pm

O_O XDDDDDDD OMG YOU CANNOT BE SERIOUS!!!
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:32 pm

ORITONS TOURNAMENT!!!!!
yea thats says im serious
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:37 pm

ok, um please scratch out Vlade then. Vlade is Nalls character so you should ask him before sighning him up, and btw, i am NOT fighting the 7 sins
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WITH SIN   Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:39 pm

-_-

u are not fighting 7 u are fighting lust with the rage towards her for seduceing nall
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